Essay 4 Very Rough Draft

The United States of America has a major public health problem. American citizens all across the United States have an unhealthy diet (Vaughan). This public health crisis, known as ‘food insecurities’, effected approximately 10.5 percent of Americans in 2019 (Cantor). Some scholarly research has suggested that one of the major contributors to food insecurities is…

Sustainability in the Fish Farming Industry…..An Annotated Bibliography and Short Report By Britney Lepore

Utilizing aquaculture systems, the fish farming industry cultivates their own seafood stocks for mass production to then be sold to the world’s population for consumption. There are several different criteria to divide aquaculture systems, the basic of which is freshwater or seawater. Those two criteria are then divided into land-based, water-based, recirculating, and integrated farming…

Peer Review of my Assigned Partner Alex Essay 3

I would just like to first mention that this review is of an extremely rough draft. For the purposes of my review the source titled “Open Ocean Fish Farming” will be referred to as source 4.  1.  Source 1- NOAA seems to be a credible source. This is a very short description of what aquaculture…

Sustainability in the Fish Farming Industry……Essay 3 Rough Draft

The fish farming industry is an integral producer of the world’s seafood supply. As the world’s population grows, so too does the need for more of these aquaculture systems (Bujas). The necessity for sustainability in the fish farming industry has become ever more apparent with the growth of the industry. There have been advances in…

Proposal for Essay 3

I propose to write an essay on the fish farming industry. I do not currently know a great deal about this industry. I know the basics, that it is the industry in which we obtain fish and shellfish to be fed to the public. I do know that because of overfishing, there is great risk…

Reflecting on Revising

I would like to begin by saying how hard the revision process has been for me. I mistakenly posted and received feedback on my 1st draft of this essay. I felt that my 3rd draft was not ‘rough’ enough. Big mistake. I was trying to apply the feedback I received to a draft that was…